Hey Guys this is my writing from yesterday and i got it from Pobble 365.
Hope you guys enjoy.
Hope you guys enjoy.
Ahmed Thursday 21 May 2020 Flying Two
Once there was a yellow bird, and he always missed flying by the green river
and the mountains. One day he was dreaming about going to it, but he couldn't because
he lived somewhere else in the forest where there were so many trees and it is so creepy
and scary. The yellow bird moved to a forest because once there was an evil bird who
lived near him on the small mountain. So he slept for 1 whole week and then one day the
evil bird came and started saying sorry the bird said. The yellow bird said I remember
you evil bird. Then the other bird was his roommate , and they played together.
The evil bird was a good bird because he didn't hit the bird anymore. `Before he used to
hit the poor yellow bird. But now they are friends. One year later another bird came.
He started to hit them then the yellow birds friends started to hit it then it went away.
The yellow bird said thank you to the green bird. The other green bird said you’re welcome
yellow bird. The other bird said thanks for saving me. Thank you so much!.
and the mountains. One day he was dreaming about going to it, but he couldn't because
he lived somewhere else in the forest where there were so many trees and it is so creepy
and scary. The yellow bird moved to a forest because once there was an evil bird who
lived near him on the small mountain. So he slept for 1 whole week and then one day the
evil bird came and started saying sorry the bird said. The yellow bird said I remember
you evil bird. Then the other bird was his roommate , and they played together.
The evil bird was a good bird because he didn't hit the bird anymore. `Before he used to
hit the poor yellow bird. But now they are friends. One year later another bird came.
He started to hit them then the yellow birds friends started to hit it then it went away.
The yellow bird said thank you to the green bird. The other green bird said you’re welcome
yellow bird. The other bird said thanks for saving me. Thank you so much!.
Hi Ahmed,
ReplyDeleteYour story was so cool.And reminder to you that( introduce the story and the character to your story)and i found this word really tricky, that you said (The evil bird was a good bird because) please check that word.But it was really cool story Ahmed.Well done.