Friday, June 26, 2020

The Big Bad Wolf

Hello everyone this is my big bad wolf writing. I did this on Monday 21 June . I edited it and i checked it. Remember always proofread your work or writing.

The Big Bad Wolf


There was a wolf who lived In the deep dark forest. He was unattractive and creepy. He was very naughty.


 The wolf had arms that were hairy and filthy. The massive wolf has pointy ears and they were sharp for hearing. He was also ugly. He has a long tail that he can wack someone with.


The big evil and mysterious wolf was very lousy and dangerous! He hunted the easy prey from the forest. He was so foolish and wicked. The wolf scratched them and hit them multiple times because the people used to pick the gorgeous flowers.


The appalling wolf was so scared that someone was going to come and hunt the bad wolf. He tricked the little red riding hood because she was all alone, and tried to pretend that he was grandma and sounded like a grandma. He is also not very truthful, he is so evil.


I think that the big bad wolf should be friendly and Kind. I think that he should also not be a bad wolf because. I wish he was never in a story.
By Ahmed

4 comments:

  1. Hello Ahmed,
    I really like you big bad wolf story,
    Maybe next you add more describing words
    But I really like it.

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    1. Thanks i will next time. I will add more describing words next time. Thanks

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  2. Hi ahmed,I like your big bad wolf writing it was very cool I relly like how you explained it.nice work.

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    1. Thanks Reiko for commenting i love it.

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