Hi Guys I Did This Writing Yesterday. Hope You Guys Enjoy.
AHMED
Stardome Tuesday 23rd June 2020
On Tuesday 23rd of june i and my class went to beautiful Stardome with my class and
with room two. First we ate lunch from school, and then we lined up with our groups.
There were two buses, one for Room Two and one for us Room Six. It was also about Matariki.
with room two. First we ate lunch from school, and then we lined up with our groups.
There were two buses, one for Room Two and one for us Room Six. It was also about Matariki.
When we went to Stardome we looked around a bit and we saw this interesting movie
about the seven sisters and Matariki. We were having fun. It was the funnest and funniest
thing about the month of June.
about the seven sisters and Matariki. We were having fun. It was the funnest and funniest
thing about the month of June.
We were all so excited it was so fun and it was like a movie theater. I learnt so much
about Stardome and Matariki. They gave us some cards that we can go next time.
I was so scared but it was so amazing.
about Stardome and Matariki. They gave us some cards that we can go next time.
I was so scared but it was so amazing.
Matariki is a celebration of Maori New year. They can enjoy
time with their family and also the rising of the Matariki star cluster.
We watched a movie about Maui and the sun and about the amazing things I learnt.
time with their family and also the rising of the Matariki star cluster.
We watched a movie about Maui and the sun and about the amazing things I learnt.
I was feeling amazing and awesome about Stardome. Because I loved the movie.
Hi Ahmed,
ReplyDeleteI like your story about Stardome but I think you
Should add more detail so your story can sound
More interesting.
Hi Ahmed,
ReplyDeleteyour Stardome writing was great but it still needs to be checked properly.Make sure you writing makes senses as well.Keep on trying Ahmed!